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Sam, great look at what Bechdel meant about her and her father being inversions of each other. Just remember to incorporate an outside source for next time. (2) In reply to - Sam Kuhn wrote a new post,...
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Melissa, great job taking a much blogged about topic and making it your own. I was very interested in your outside source as well. (3) In reply to - Melissa Mooney wrote a new post, Flower Power, on...
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Alison, I thought you brought up a really great point that I hope we’ll get to talk about more tomorrow. (3) In reply to - Allison wrote a new post, (Non)Fiction?, on the site Memoirs 2016 In the comic...
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Emma, great job analyzing the more visual aspects of the text. You were one of the few people that took this task on to such an extent. (3) In reply to - Emma wrote a new post, The Fiction in Reality,...
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Logan, good job close reading a few panels and finding their significance to the rest of the text. (3) In reply to - Logan wrote a new post, All Good– or bad– Things Come to an End, on the site Memoirs...
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Adam, while you have a solid post, just make sure that you’re reading the text carefully. I’m think that Bruce is criticizing Alison’s style on page 98 rather than his wife’s. (2) In reply to - Adam...
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Hung, be careful not to conflate gender with sexual orientation, since they are too very separate things. In addition, blog posts should be about the readings that were assigned for the upcoming class,...
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Emma, great post drawing parallels between the physical and the emotional within Bruce Bechdel’s life. I think you could have expanded you analysis within the second paragraph, but other than that this...
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Kailea, great observation to make about the irony within page 133. However, I think it would have helped to strengthen your post if you had provided a more detailed analysis or provided more textual...
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Adam, while this is a solid start at analyzing the chapter, there are a couple uses of phrases that you need to explain in greater detail. For example, you state “through the use of characterization.”...
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Melody, I thought that you did a great job of weaving together textual analysis with your outside source. The amount of detail you payed to the depictions of within the text, really heightened your...
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Connor, while I think the beginning of your post starts out with a strong interrogation of the text, there are a couple of claims that you make towards the end that you don’t provide textual support...
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Allison, I was very impressed with the connection that you drew between using the correct translation and Alison’s obsession with documenting unbiased reality. (3) In reply to - Allison wrote a new...
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Lanie, while you provided textual examples and analysis, I think a few more examples from throughout the text or pulling more details from the panels that you chose to analyze would have helped to...
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Isaiah, I thought you did a great job providing outside analysis and examining textual evidence. However, I’m unclear as to what the argument of your post was. Make sure that you state that clearly at...
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Logan, good job fully interrogating the implications of the intersections that you chose. This was a comprehensive blog post that made unique and thoughtful arguments. (3) In reply to - Logan wrote a...
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Melanie, an excellent, thoughtful blog post as always. Keep up the good work. (3) In reply to - Melanie K. wrote a new post, The Importance of Being Secretive, on the site Memoirs 2016 When I read The...
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Mary, I thought that your post incorporated great outside sources. I was especially impressed with you connection between two different references within the text. I do think that your post could have...
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James, excellent blog post. I thought the lens of antihero was a unique, yet well-suited to view this book, and specifically this chapter. The inclusion of more typical heroes from mythology was also a...
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Jinzhe, great job with your post. You did an excellent job drawing the connection from the historical references present and its relevance to the text. I think you could have probably elaborated on...
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